[Highland Park] seeking feedback on email requesting Zipcar
Everyone, I am planning to send an email requesting a Zipcar (www.zipcar.com) for our neighborhood. Below is a draft of the email I was going to send. Please send me suggestions for how to improve this email. I will need your comments by Wednesday before noon. Thanks, Deb Polk 1334 N. Sheridan Ave. ********* Hi - We are several families living in Highland Park, Pittsburgh, who have been sharing a car for several years. Alas, the "sharing" car is dying. We could buy another car to share, but then we thought - hey, why don't we get a Zipcar near us! (That's the kind of people we are.) We think once you do the research on our neighborhood (Highland Park, Pittsburgh), you'll see why your cars would make so much sense here. We have a "business district" at Highland Avenue (Tazza D'Oro is a destination coffe shop) and Bryant Street (with shops that support the neighborhood, supported by our Community Development Corporation). Putting the car near this corner would be perfect! Here are some links about us. http://www.tazzadoro.net/ http://www.highlandparkpa.com/ Thanks for considering our request! Please let me know if you are interested. Deb Polk 1334 N. Sheridan Ave. Pittsburgh, PA 15206 412.362.5027
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